Save Me (Being Edited) Chapter 1

Snow’s POV 

 I laughed and ran as Daddy chased me all around the yard while Mommy watched us having fun. Finally, Daddy caught me and started tickling me.”‘D-Daddy! D-Daddy stop, it tickles! I can’t bweathe!” I squealed. Mommy chuckled.”Alright honey, time to let him up before you kill him.” Daddy frowned. “But I was just getting started, love.” I giggled, watching my parents tease each other as we walked inside our house. They were werecats and we don’t know what I will be until later on tonight. Mommy poked my nose, snapping me out of my thoughts.

“Alright little prince, are you ready for tonight?” she asked, and I nodded profusely before answering.

“I c-c-can’t wait!” I cheered, jumping up and down. Mommy and Daddy shared a look before laughing.

“We’ll have to wait and see, champ.” Daddy said, still chucking a little. I giggled and ran to Daddy and hugged him. 

“You won’t leave me, ever, right Daddy?” He ruffled my hair and smirked. 

“You’re right champ, I’ll never leave you.” 

“And neither will I.” Interjected Mommy. 

 I whimpered, “P-promise Daddy and M-mommy?”    

“We promise, champ, we’ll never leave you.” He whispered, reassuringly. Daddy patted my head once more before going on to barbeque the meat. I left silently, looking for Mommy. I slowly walked downstairs as I whined. I couldn’t find Mommy, I wanted her a lot. I yelled out “Mommy!” Mommy came running toward me and stopped in front of me. She gently hugged me.

“What’s wrong, little prince?”

I started crying “I-I couldn’t f-f-f-find y-you” She cooed and shushed me quietly. After a few minutes, Daddy came into the house with a plate of delicious meat and roasted vegetables. “Sorry I took so long, champ. I had to finish cooking for you and Mommy.” I wiped away the remaining tears and smiled up at him with slightly puffy eyes. “It ‘kay d-daddy.” We sat down at the table and said a prayer to the Moon Goddess before eating. 

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Hey guys! I finally have some time to edit Save Me Alpha, tell me what you think. Anyway, I noticed that several people had some questions about Snow’s speech. Yes, I knew when I wrote him that 8 year old’s didn’t talk like that but at the time of writing Save Me Alpha. I was having some issues with my speech so I decided to write about someone who has speech problems. 

While writing Save Me Alpha, I didn’t like where I went with it so I will be fixing a lot of things. I can’t guarantee that the punctuation will be any better because I really struggle with that but I will do my best. Furthermore, I hope all of you have a nice day or night and enjoy the story!